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Love it so far!!!

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CANT WAIT!!!/pos

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A steam-punk portal-fantasy murder-mystery, you say? And I'm the (presumed) villain? Sign me up!

Though so far, I can't say that the Sovereign seems like a villain? Dalgliesh, Fairburne, the servant siblings and even the ghost of Angelica certainly seem to like them well enough.

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Hmm OG Sovereign was a different person to different people. They were not evil for evil's sake, but was rather ruthless when they wanted something go their way.

They are also an usurper, basically. Some hate them, some love them. You'll get some snippets of their diary as a bit of insight into their mind^^

I'm still not quite sure how evil I want MC Sovereign to get honestly 😅 I'm leaning a bit towards Homelander level, but I'm thinking some of the ROs will not be super happy about it.

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I can't say that I'm familiar with Homelander (I literally just googled it and went "oh the guy from that meme what has laser beam-eyes", but I'm still clueless as to his level of evil 😅). 

But regardless, this first chapter is quite the promising start; so I look forward to learning more about Sovereign and the rest of the cast, and the relationships between them - as well as to getting around to trying your Calamity Control.

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Hopefully this is the right place to say, but the menu bar on the top (at least for PC) actually covers a decent bit of text on each page. Sorry!

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Hey^^ Is your screen at 100%? Because if you make it smaller the text goes up under the menu, but at 100% it should look like this:
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This was fantastic!  Can't wait for the next chapter!

Glad you like it so far! ♥

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Very well written and honestly a cool concept! Reminds me of one of those reincarnation manwha's that I tend to read but with steampunk aesthetic. I look forward to further development of this story and to find out more about our dear sovereign. :D

Hehe, I've always loved the isekai genre 🤭
Glad you're interested in the story! 💕